Monday, February 20, 2017

Poem

I hear the crowd roar
roaring like a boar,
dribbling down the court
I feel like a plane at the airport

flames roaring behind
as I look for a sign
I make a move,
Just trying to prove my value

Varsity is what I want,
so I hunt
I hunt for points,
but my joints can't go any more

Rhyme Scheme
Simile
consonance

3 comments:

  1. This is a good poem. I like the way you used these poetry tools in your poem.

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  2. I like how you used rhyming effectively.

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  3. This Was a great Poem. I noticed the way you used the poetry tools in your poem.

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